IELTS Writing Task 2 Discussion Essay: Urbanization — Model Answer
IELTS Writing Task 2 Discussion Essay: Urbanization — Model Answer. Question, examiner-style analysis and common traps.
The question
Some people prefer to live in a house in the countryside. Others think that cities are better places to live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Model answer (opening excerpt)
The global demographic shift toward metropolitan centers has intensified the debate regarding the ideal living environment. While a significant cohort maintains that the tranquility and communal ties of rural life are indispensable, others argue that the economic and cultural infrastructure of urban centers offers a superior quality of life. This essay will examine both perspectives before arguing that while the countryside provides psychological respite, the city remains the primary engine for individual and professional development.
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The Trap → The Logic → The Fix
The Trap: Many students attempt to use "sophisticated" words they found in a list, leading to "word salad" where the meaning is obscured. (e.g., "The urbanization is a deleterious phenomenon for the rustic folks.")
The Logic: Examiners do not reward "big words"; we reward precision. A Band 9 candidate chooses the word that fits the context most accurately. "Urban sprawl" is better than "big city growth" because it describes a specific type of horizontal expansion.
The Fix: Instead of memorizing synonyms, learn collocations.
- Don't just learn: City
- Learn: Urban infrastructure, metropolitan hub, densely populated center.
- Don't just learn: Countryside
- Learn: Pastoral setting, rural hinterland, remote settlement.
Band-by-Band Breakdown: Urbanization Task
| Element | Band 9 (The Model Above) | Band 6 (The Common Error) |
|---|---|---|
| Task Response | Addresses "Discuss both views" with balanced, extended arguments for each side. | Often focuses too much on one side or gives a generic opinion without support. |
| Coherence | Uses "thematic linking." Paragraphs flow from psychological benefits to economic advantages. | Uses "mechanical linking." Overuses "Firstly, Secondly, In conclusion" at the start of every sentence. |
| Lexical Resource | Uses precise terms: pastoral tranquility, socio-economic mobility, agglomeration effects. | Uses basic terms: quiet life, moving up in jobs, many people in one place. |
| Grammatical Range | Features complex structures: "While a significant cohort maintains... others argue..." (Complex Contrast). | Relies on simple or compound sentences: "Some people like the city. But other people like the country." |
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